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In order to put more time in writing, revising, and editing I need to step away from social media. 🙂 #amwriting
These days, every “how to succeed in as an author” blog you read advises you to release as many books as you can as quickly you can. All successful indie authors (that I know) have multiple books–or series–on the market, and several have parlayed their methodology into side businesses focused on telling other indie authors how to write, publish, and sell indie books–advice that boils down to, “write a lot of books and bring them to market fast.”
This strategy isn’t unique to indie authors. Many traditionally published authors, both famous and obscure, push work out quickly too, especially if they’re writing series. Being prolific works if you want to sell books, and if you can produce a page-turner in six months or less, you’re awesome.
An awful lot of authors can’t really produce a gripping story as a first draft, or a second. When they try, the work ends up being substandard, or not as good as it could have been…
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Just discovered this blog and the author’s writing style is enjoyable and the sometimes provocative subjects he takes on may cause thin-skinned writers to revert to blubbering cry babies or inspire them to write stronger, leaner, and maybe even meaner.
Hey, Writers: Stop Your Freakin’ Whining
By Larry Kahaner
Most of my working life, I’ve been a non-fiction writer. I’ve penned over 15 books some with my name and some I’ve ghosted. I know a lot of non-fiction writers. They’re my friends and colleagues.
Don’t be like this writer.
When I decided to write a novel, USA, Inc., which was just published, (shameless plug) I started hobnobbing with fiction authors, some established but mostly newbies like me. In fact, I started this blog to help me move from non-fiction to fiction. I hope I’ve helped others do the same, because many non-fiction writing traits, habits and experience are transferable.
Right off the bat, though, I noticed that fiction writers are different than non-fiction writers — and not in a good way.
They are a bunch of whiney-babies.
They complain about money. They grumble about how the work is difficult…
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My first middle-grade fiction novel was released about 10 days ago! 🙂
So far, I’ve had two purchases! 🙂 🙂
Whoever you are, I thank you much! I’d be honored if you wrote a review.
On Monday, my proof copy arrived and I’m looking forward to writing the second book of the series, “Moondust”.
That First Chapter
Writing the first chapter is something I struggle with because I want those first sentences, that first paragraph, that first page to be absolutely fabulous. So, sometimes I’m afraid to write anything at first. I don’t have a lot of time on my hands lately. My three sons, my husband, and my full-time job as a reading teacher keeps me extremely busy!
Since I want that first chapter to draw readers in and never let them go until they’ve completed reading the book, place it down, satisfied or at best, hungry for the next book.
I dare not say that I want the first chapter to be perfect because such a place doesn’t exist.
The first chapter is extremely important. Especially when it comes to high fantasy. High fantasy (or epic fantasy) is a subgenre of fantasy defined by its setting in a fictional universe or by the epic stature of its characters, themes, and plot. Whatever that means, right? Thanks Mr. Wikipedia.
Basically, high fantasy, is one of the hardest fiction subgenres to write. I mean, think about it! You’re creating your own world! The continents, the oceans, the seas, the cities, the roads, the people, their cultures, who they trade with, who they fight with, who they may or may not worship. Everything. Single. Blasted. Thing!
It’s overwhelmingly . . . FRACKING-FUNTASTIC!
And the first chapter has the potential to introduce so many things:
- the mood
- the tone
- the main characters
- the conflict
- the antagonist(s)
- what’s at stake
- the setting
When I originally wrote Prelude to Morning, I didn’t know that it would be a trilogy. I had some ideas that it could possibly be a series. Well, that was only if it didn’t remain a stand-alone novel. After my oldest brother, Serge Desir, fellow author and video game bad-ass and author E. Rose Sabin gave me some brutal and honest feedback on the book’s weaknesses, I realized I had a lot of work to do to make the book as wonderful as it should be. And for a time, an agent was interested. Until, the world-building fell apart. 😦
So, I searched for help and re-rendered the map (thanks E. Paige Burks) :
Next, I created a timeline, which I’ll share in a future post.
The timeline helped me to layout the history of the world of Reath (rhymes with death — an anagram for Earth). The timeline included:
- The prehistoric era
- Past wars
- Catastrophic events
All of these events shaped the world as it is now for the main characters.
So much depth. So much culture. So many languages. So many places. So overwhelming like our world, Earth. And how does one condense so much beauty into a single book.
Which put me at an impasse or is it a fork in the road?
One path would lead me to writing a book that would be heavy enough to murder someone with:
And a third path appeared to me. . . I’d have to break the story into more than one book.
And Then there were Three . . .
Bloodcraft Trilogy — (why the term bloodcraft ?–which I’m proud of coining — more on that in a future post).
However, I loved the idea of music being interwoven into this world and used different types of movement names in each of the three books that echoed and underscored the story’s themes.
*Book 1: Rhapsody of the Gods
A rhapsody in music is a one-movement work that is episodic yet integrated, free-flowing in structure, featuring a range of highly contrasted moods, colour and tonality. An air of spontaneous inspiration and a sense of improvisation make it freer in form than a set of variations.
Book 2: Prelude to Morning
Preludes are characterized by being short and sweet (relatively), with a melodic and/or rhythmic motif that is featured throughout the piece. This motif will recur throughout the piece, sometimes differing slightly as the music progresses. A prelude may be played on its own, or as a preface to another piece, usually more complex.
Book 3: Nocturne of Twilight
Nocturnes are generally lyrical and tranquil pieces. The nocturne is known for being expressive above all else. It follows no specific form, but evolves as the music progresses.
To Prologue or Not To Prologue
In the first several drafts of Prelude to Morning, I originally included a prologue in the beginning. After researching prologues and learning that they’re only necessary if the opening is out of time sequence with the remainder of the story. So, I decided to rename the prologue as chapter one.
However, in my paranormal urban fantasy, Forbidden, Book One of Gabriel Lennox Series, a prologue was necessary because it fit that description and helped to create a creepy ending, which I wrote as a near mirror image epilogue. Thus, coming full circle.
How do you go about setting the stage for your high fantasy novel?
Another inspirational post from Moorbey! Reblogging is sweet. 😀
Before the Read 180 curriculum was revised, one of the workshops focused on the Harlem Renaissance and the poetry of Langston Hughes. 🙂 He’s a marvelous master of the written word and worth celebrating.